I’m fairly certain this is my favorite chapter you’ve done for this piece. I’ve really, really enjoyed the atmosphere you’ve been working with but I didn’t much care for Rin in and of herself as she seemed very half glass empty kind of girl for the entirety of the story and I found it a bit tiresome but then we both had completely different interpretations of points so that’s all there.

The flashback at the ending of this chapter helped me to make more sense of Rin’s character that I hadn’t been able to grasp before. Not that I didn’t enjoy it in and of itself it was well done mixed in with the letter and all her other memories. Your can do those sorts of sequences so wonderfully and this one was one of the better ones. It was very easy to visualize it.

I’m also fond of the feeling for the story even if I have no idea what’s going on in it.

Partly randomly not related; I’m really glad there was some Aeris and Iffy interaction in the last chapter of Tall Tales or I’d feel a bit oversaturated with the father-daughter dynamics. I know it’s not intended for Vincent to be one of Aeris dad’s it’s just how it clicks in my brain which has little to do with the narration. So the brief mom conversation there was refreshing. It all reminds me of the break-up meme you did last year was it.

Not that I don’t utterly enjoy father-daughter relationships as they’re interesting and I really don’t have that sort of relationship with my father at all I suppose he is more like how people do the mother in these sorts of relationships while my mom’s more of the dad so it’s neat to see the other side. I guess I don’t like seeing the moms get left out of the conflict as I suppose I’m weird. Not that you need to know that I’m just trying to work thing out I suppose.

Once again I enjoyed the chapter a lot.