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(from Sev -- apparently IJ is mad at me?)
Oh, Laguna. XDD
I love how understanding Quistis is too -- so many people write her as this desperate woman who "seekritly wants true love", when in reality Quistis seems to understand that self and career can be just as important as "romance", if not more important. She's very... practical. I like that.
And I think my favorite line is still Rinoa wanting to be more than the "Commander's girlfriend". Because she would. And should
I LOVE YOU
(The one thing that always hangs me up with your writing is dialogue. It's sometimes difficult for me to tell who is saying what - although I can figure it out eventually - because you don't use dialogue tags. I know it's just your style; just sayin'. XD)
Oh, Laguna. XDD
I love how understanding Quistis is too -- so many people write her as this desperate woman who "seekritly wants true love", when in reality Quistis seems to understand that self and career can be just as important as "romance", if not more important. She's very... practical. I like that.
And I think my favorite line is still Rinoa wanting to be more than the "Commander's girlfriend". Because she would. And should
I LOVE YOU
(The one thing that always hangs me up with your writing is dialogue. It's sometimes difficult for me to tell who is saying what - although I can figure it out eventually - because you don't use dialogue tags. I know it's just your style; just sayin'. XD)